Tuesday 7 September 2010

Longer Day

I think Ms Hansell should not make the school day longer.

My class will be too tired to sit on the mat and and to sit at the desks and write. Everyday we will be sleepy and tired. We might not have enough time to sleep and we wont wake up early.

Teachers might be too tired and they might run out of ideas. They will be stressed out and grumpy .They would need to spend time with their own families and they will be too tired just like we will be. Teachers  will need to relax and get ready for tomorrows lessons.

We will need to spend more time with our families and we might miss out on the fun with them. If we miss out on the fun,  our school days will not be cool because when we go back home there will be no one to look after us.!

Ms Hansell, I have written three reasons why we should not make the school days longer. Think very hard about not making the school days longer please.

By Crystal

2 comments:

  1. Crystal, you have provided some sound reasons why we should not lengthen the school day.

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  2. I completely agree with you Crystal. You have explained your reasons clearly and I'm convinced! Keep up the great writing!

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