i don't know why but I felt like a dwarf
it seems everyone around me is just too tall
so then again i thought i was small
time was ticking as we walked by
did i think we were going to die
everyone walked with their heads bowed down
next minute you see that they've grown a frown
lower our rods into the water
then i pull a fish that's a quarter
throw it back that's that
find my dad sitting back
finishing up that was fun
can't wait to get back so i started to run
by celeste
You are a very talented poet Celeste. Thank you for posting a very original piece on your class blog
ReplyDeleteAwesome poem, Celeste. I like the way you made it rhyme!
ReplyDeleteCeleste - I really like this piece of writing, I am lucky enough to have been to Dunkirk Wharf so I know what it looks like, but anyone who dosen't would get a great idea of what its like by reading your poem! Like the picture too although the fish seems really small! Great written work!
ReplyDeletecool poem!
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