Willie Ngaia-Cummings produced this piece of writing in which he used adjectives, verbs, adverbs, and simile to paint a picture AND set the tone (the feel) for his audience as well.
Great writing Willie!
We are Year 3 and 4 students at Tamaki Primary School, a Manaiakalani school in Auckland and our teachers are Miss Ashley and Mrs Sharma.
Love your description, Willie - it's so cold this morning - I want to be under that tree on your tropical island!
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