Alyssa - WALT write about our cultures

Tuna had a magic korokoro.He bounced out of the lack over alaman rd  over  tamaki primary school over tripoli rd and on to benghazi rd. Tuna jumped in to alyssa’s house tuna opened his waha wide Alyssa grabbed a pio from tuna’s korokoro and then alyssa began to dance after that tuna went  back to the lack

The next day tuna bounced out of the lack over alaman rd  over  tamaki primary school over tripoli rd and on to benghazi rd.  Tuna bounced into alyssa’s whare and opened his waha wide.Alyssa grabbed a piupiu from tuna and started to kanikani alyssa kanikani all day and all night.

Thank you for reading my story i hoped you enjoyed my amazing story.

Awesome story Alyssa! I love how you have added detail to your story, like "Alyssa began to kanikani, she kanikanied all night long." This shows you have been thinking about your story and reading it back to check it makes sense as well.
Awesome. I am going to post this on the class blog.
Miss Ashley

Alyssa - Fun Picnic Day!

"whooooo" this is the best day of my life!" shouted Hope L. Me and Hope L was having fun with each other. My favourite part was when all the kids was wetting the teachers. When I wet Miss Ashley she was so cold, happy and so excited that I wet her. But Hope L's favourite part was when she went down the slippery slide. When we went on the bouncy castle, had ice blocks and sausages We were playing water fights with the kids and teachers. But the best part was when we were respecting the kids and teachers on our fun day. Miss Kelly said we are going to have fun because we missed our on the pool day.  It was amazing. On Thursday, I loved the slip and slide, bouncy castle and playing water fight, having ice blocks, tree walk and bumble bee hunt, sponge run and sausages. It is a beautiful day on Thursday. On Thursday there was a big, cool and handsome kids and teachers on the fun day. But on Thursday, kids was soo sooo sooo amazing. On Thursday, all the kids outside, they were so cool, so smart, so happy, so excited and so brave. When we were playing on the bouncy castle. We were taking risks of each other and taking turns with each other. We dreamt big to look after each other and it was as fun as a Funday, as cool as a cool day, as brave as they were are brave.

By Alyssa

Narrative writing

This week we have been writing about when we met a Gruffalo
Here is Alyssa's imaginative story.

When I met a Gruffalo

Once when I was strolling through the woods, I saw a giant Guffalo. It looked like a bear. It had orange eyes and they looked like fire. It had a black tongue that looked like a swirly snake. The giant Grufflao had purple prickles all over his back. It looked very grumpy and I was scared.

I looked straight into his eyes and screamed “ Help help! I am going to get eaten by a Gruffalo”. I thought quickly… And I called the animal control. I was so terrified that I shouted out loud and started to cry, but no one was there. The Gruffalo was following me in the woods.

The animal control came in five minutes and they got a big net. They grabbed the Gruffalo in the net and put him in a big truck. Then they took the Gruffalo to the zoo. Some time later I heard on the radio  that they have a new creature at the zoo and everyone went to the zoo to see ‘The Gruffalo’

By Alyssa