Wednesday, 21 September 2016

Hope L @ Tamaki Primary School: a wedding day

Aw, what a fairytale ending - and they lived happily ever after!
Yus! You have got a simile, you have got dialogue, you have added detail and some powerful words. Awesome! 
Next steps - where are your paragraphs? (I'm sure you did this in your book! Make sure you type these in!)

Hope L @ Tamaki Primary School: a wedding day:  Once there was a lady who was getting married so she put on ha dress  as soft as a marshmallow then she  put on her shoes but her husband ...

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