THE POLICE HELICOPTER
A couple of weeks ago after assembly, we all went outside to do cross-country, to get fit. After our run we did some stretches. Then we all lined up by the friendship seats.
We saw some police come to the school. This made me feel nervous as I thought there had been a robbery. Then I saw all the teachers with cameras, and I looked up and saw a helicopter. It landed on our field and I was really excited and so was every body else. We were all asking lots of questions about the helicopter.
Then after it took off we had to go back to class and we did lots of talking about the helicopter and wrote down as many facts as we could remember.
By Peni
Well done, Peni. You have written a very accurate recount of the helicopter visit!
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hi Peni
ReplyDeleteIt`s vai and Picilla and we would like to say that you have a stunning recount about the helicopter visit.
nice work.
by picilla and vai
Hey Peni, it's Tuipulotu and I'd like to say that your recount is very very awesome!!
ReplyDeleteWell Done!!
wow Peni
ReplyDeleteGreat story it was the best day ever keep up the good story's.
Your Friend KEZIAH.
Wow your story amazing.I loved the way you use powerful word in your story
ReplyDeleteWOW i like your writing and your powerful words and a great story
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ReplyDeletehi Peni its me Ara i would like to say that your recoant is very very good
ReplyDeleteWell done Peni,what a good piece of work
ReplyDeleteWell done Peni,what a good piece of work
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