Friday, 17 September 2010

Sadness poem

Sadness is a dark grey wall.
It has this dry taste of rotten steak.
When you sniff the air, it's a wet dog running through the house.
When you look out a window, it's a polluted beach.
When you sleep, it's a voice ecohing in your head.
When you're holding the air, there's nothing to hold on to.


SADNESS FRIGHTENS ME!!!!!!


by Heaven

4 comments:

  1. I understand how "Sadness" can frighten you Heaven. You have used some good expressions. My favourite one is " when you sleep, it's a voice echoing in your head." - Well done.

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  2. Heaven what a wonderful poem. My favourite sentence is the part how you describe your taste. That is like a story writter at the same time .
    Keep it up .

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  3. That was a very expressive poem Heaven. I think you express yourself extremely well and sadness can be a frightening emotion. Your really awesome my girl.

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  4. Nice poem Heaven!

    By Crystal

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