Thursday 31 March 2011

Japan

There was an earthquake in Japan. Some people were on a rocking boat, and the tree was shaking. The water was coming and going, and the man was scared.        

by Loni
                                                                                                                 
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4 comments:

  1. RKELLY6 April 2011 at 20:33

    Well done , Loni - I think i sore the picture of the people on the boat!

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  2. lika9 May 2011 at 12:23

    Loni your writing is amazing for age keep up the good work

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  3. Anonymous16 July 2011 at 20:33

    Good job Loni, I like what you have have done.

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  4. DANISHA23 September 2011 at 21:56

    LONI I THINK YOUR WORK IS FABULOUSE AND I COULD JUST IMAGINE THOSE PEOPLE ON THE BOAT

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