I will tell you all the things I do.
I want everyone to know that I am one beautiful, Tongan girl who has nice dark brown, sparkly eyes. I also have fabulous skin.
I just want everybody to know that I am cool and amazing. I play sport at home. I like riding my bike and playing with my brother. I love playing netball.
I am one outstanding student in class. Also, I am the oldest girl in my family.
I want everyone to know that I feel happy all the time and sometimes I am spoilt by my mum and my cousin.
And lastly I want people to know I have a beautiful Principal at T.P.S.
by Malia
We are Year 3 and 4 students at Tamaki Primary School, a Manaiakalani school in Auckland and our teachers are Miss Ashley and Mrs Sharma.
Malia, your description of yourself is so real ! Congratulations on a very informative piece of writing. I am honoured to feature in your descriptive writing. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteGreat description, Malia. Keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteGreat stor Mr is a great teacher isn't he.Keep it up:)
ReplyDeleteHi Malia, you have one nice work that describes your self it looks beautiful me and my friends were just reading and they also loved it too. we hope to come visit sometimes course we know that Mr lintott has been a good man to yous well that how it was back in our days, well me have to go now hope to see more comments about this beautiful work.cern
ReplyDeletehi malia i love the expretion that you write with
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