Loneliness is dark blue.
To my tongue it's sour milk that's been in the sun for days.
That stinky cheese you've had in the fridge for weeks.
A stray dog meandering down the streets.
A woman in a burning building screaming for help.
To me loneliness is horrifying.
by Helem
We are Year 3 and 4 students at Tamaki Primary School, a Manaiakalani school in Auckland and our teachers are Miss Ashley and Mrs Sharma.
Helem, I am loving the word "meandering" in your Loneliness poem - wonderful audience appeal
ReplyDeleteWhat a sad poem, Helem - your description of loneliness makes me feel sad - well done!
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