I have an MP3 player
That plays songs for me.
I put it on loud
It vibrates the ground
It cracks my mirror and my glass too.
I have the very best songs
They are very long.
My favourite song is the whole cd
Where would I be without my MP3?.
Doing my homework. Boring!
By Teresa-Mae
We are Year 3 and 4 students at Tamaki Primary School, a Manaiakalani school in Auckland and our teachers are Miss Ashley and Mrs Sharma.
You have used some good rhythm and rhyme in your Machine Poem Teresa Mae. Listening to music is my favourite thing to do too - even when I'm doing my homework!
ReplyDeleteGreat poem, Teresa Mae - I read your poem out loud to myself and it does have a good rhythm!
ReplyDeletecool,it is a great story teresa-mae
ReplyDeleteHi Teresa Mae. I love my MP3 too. I have all my favourite music on it and I wear it when I am out walking to help me go faster.
ReplyDeleteYou poem flows really well and you have used great words to make a picture in my head. Thanks for sharing your work.
Mrs Boyer