Friday, 4 June 2010

The Peter Jackson Story.

A long time ago on one spooky, wintery night when the moon was glowing, two boys called David and Aaron broke into an old abandoned school - St Mary's College. When they broke inside it was cold, damp and foggy. It was like they were in a movie.

David and Aaron walked along the corridor. Suddenly, they noticed some footprints leading towards the cafeteria.They were so curious to know where they lead  that they followed the footprints into the cafeteria. When they were inside, the door slammed shut and they saw thousands of broken mirrors. 

They thought that they were at a level in a game and the worst part was they had played this game before. It was the level in the game where they were in a cafeteria with thousands of mirrors and they were trapped with Peter Jackson and he was trying to kill them.  They had passed this level before and so they had a plan. They were in the game!

They had to hurry because Peter Jackson was right behind them. But they managed to get out. They found the exit and ran. They were heading for the door when Peter Jackson blocked the way. Aaron remembered the pepper spray that his dad always put in his pants pocket. He got it out and sprayed it all over Peter Jackson who melted away and became a memory.

David and Aaron left the school and went home.       
                                                                               By Keziah

8 comments:

  1. hey keziah i really like your Peter Jackson but i especially like the part when Peter jackson melted by Aaron's pepper spray.
    Your sister Natalia.

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  2. hey keziah this is a awesome story. I like the way you have used adjectives. This Peter Jackson story sent a chill down my spine. Keep up the great work.

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  3. i really like your story it gave me chills. This would have to be the most mysterious story i have ever read.

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  4. Thank goodness for the pepper spray!! Great imaginative story, Keziah.

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  5. Thank goodness for the pepper spray!! Great imaginative story, Keziah.

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  6. Thank goodness for the pepper spray!! Great imaginative story, Keziah.

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  7. Hi Keziah good story on Peter Jackson.....

    Crystal

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  8. Hi Keziah good story on Peter Jackson.....

    Crystal

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