I love how you have tried to add detail here Stanley - like 'she closed her eyes as tight as she could'. You have also included Dialogue in your story which is amazing! Kia kaha Stanley!
Stanley T @ Tamaki Primary School: Ana
We are Year 3 and 4 students at Tamaki Primary School, a Manaiakalani school in Auckland and our teachers are Miss Ashley and Mrs Sharma.
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great work stanley you add lot of powerful words to your story keep it up with powerful kaka pa
ReplyDeleteHi Stanley, I really like that you put powerful words in your story great job!
ReplyDeletestanly you have good idear about your story when Anna went swimming great job.
ReplyDeletemiss it was a good idea to put the video on the class blog because people learns to.
ReplyDeleteHI Stanley it was amazing you have such great ideas ka pai!!
ReplyDeletehi stanley can you please put a photo in it stanly
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