Monday 29 August 2016

Stanley T @ Tamaki Primary School: Ana



I love how you have tried to add detail here Stanley - like 'she closed her eyes as tight as she could'. You have also included Dialogue in your story which is amazing! Kia kaha Stanley!





Stanley T @ Tamaki Primary School: Ana

6 comments:

  1. great work stanley you add lot of powerful words to your story keep it up with powerful kaka pa

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  2. Hi Stanley, I really like that you put powerful words in your story great job!

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  3. stanly you have good idear about your story when Anna went swimming great job.

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  4. miss it was a good idea to put the video on the class blog because people learns to.

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  5. HI Stanley it was amazing you have such great ideas ka pai!!

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  6. hi stanley can you please put a photo in it stanly

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