You have used dialogue so well in this story Auckland! lady said "C-C-COBRAS!!". This really shows how she felt and how scared she was to see the scary cobras. Great job!
Auckland @ Tamaki Primary School: The 10 cobras: 1 Bailey there was a man and a lady .Who were the only people on Earth.C walk into a Spooky Forest I heard he trees and the sky was dark and...
We are Year 3 and 4 students at Tamaki Primary School, a Manaiakalani school in Auckland and our teachers are Miss Ashley and Mrs Sharma.
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