Lopi, I know you wrote them in your book - where are your full stops and punctuation?
I LOVE the problem you have put into this story - actually, there are lots of little problem! When I read it makes me think 'oh whats going to happen' and I feel excited to keep reading. Well done Lopi! Your writing has improved sooo much in the past few weeks!
Lopiseni @ Tamaki Primary School: zombies: jack was going through the wood these zombies came for jack was the only one lifted so the zombies found jack and jack ran to the other s...
We are Year 3 and 4 students at Tamaki Primary School, a Manaiakalani school in Auckland and our teachers are Miss Ashley and Mrs Sharma.
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