OH MY GOODNESS THIS IS SO SCARY!
I love how you have used lots of interesting and powerful words like guillotine and invisible. They make your story seem real!
Next steps - describe your character more in detail. You maybe could explain what his name was, why he lived in the forrest, why he liked killing people, etc.
Joshua N @ Tamaki Primary School: the invisible man: in the forest there lived a invisible man that had a secret lair a secret button on one tree that had a password. some people say that the ...
We are Year 3 and 4 students at Tamaki Primary School, a Manaiakalani school in Auckland and our teachers are Miss Ashley and Mrs Sharma.
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