Oh my goodness Maria, your writing has improved so much! I love how you have used so many powerful words like grumpy wolves, clambered up the tree, charging, so frightened, deep dark forrest, humungous. Amazing! It makes your writing so interesting!
Maria @ Tamaki Primary School: haunted story: Once upon a time there was a man called BoB he was THE only person brave then he went with his car to THE deep dark forest that had grampy w...
We are Year 3 and 4 students at Tamaki Primary School, a Manaiakalani school in Auckland and our teachers are Miss Ashley and Mrs Sharma.
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